Snus Haiku

[razor]

Not trying to be a know-it-all, but Haiku form is as follows:

First line = 5 syllables
Second line = 7 syllables
Third line = 5 syllables

That is true if you are writting in Japanese. In English you should stay as close to the syllable count as possible, but style and content are more important. Being off by a syllable in a line, here or there, is acceptable in English. Of course, sticking with 5-7-5 is the goal if the Haiku does not suffer with the loss or addition of a syllable. I would rather read a GREAT 6-7-5 than a good 5-7-5.

[razor]

Sipping on my beer
Snus nectar slips through my teeth
Marriage in heaven

[snusfather]

Hand bakeing Ettan
My dog and I watch the moon
Crisp wind blows dry leaves

[cosmokramer]

I love Ted Koppel
Informative and witty.
Very super voice.

Go tampa bay rays
Thanks for beating the redsox
God I hate Boston.

Chicago bears, Yes!
Beat the vikings by 1 score.
That's why we're first place

Beans, beans, magic fruit
ya know, the more that you eat,
the more you will toot.

[airwoodstock]

Pris of snus in lip
A pinch of snuff in the nose
Heaven, sheer Heaven!

[Premium Parrots]

最近「ウェブは人間の考え方に似ている」と思います。いろんなアイデアから"リンク"がありますね。今日またインター ネットを使いすぎ、ゴールデンバット(昨日のポスト）と無頼派（９月のポスト）の"リンク"を見つけまし た。太宰 治 (だざい おさむ）はゴールデンバットが好きそうでした（ここに見て、勉強に成りました）。それと、「無頼派」の一 人でした。 8)


is that traditional enuff?

[RobME]

Haiku... to a new addiction... ummm... sport.

Snuff fragrance gentle
Whispers Autumn to my breath
Neti pot stands near.

Oh my nose my nose
it calls to a handkerchief
tissue I miss you.

a choo, god bless you!
it sucks being sick today
but it's just a ruse.

snus snus go away
come on back another day
when the snuff is gone.

ok so I took a few creative liberties...

8)

[cocsp2002]

Citrus and pepper
Crisp fall awakens senses
Pris of General.




Had to stay true to my brand...sure is hard when the name is 3 syllables though!

[snusfather]

最近「ウェブは人間の考え方に似ている」と思います。いろんなアイデアから"リンク"がありますね。今日またインター ネットを使いすぎ、ゴールデンバット(昨日のポスト）と無頼派（９月のポスト）の"リンク"を見つけまし た。太宰 治 (だざい おさむ）はゴールデンバットが好きそうでした（ここに見て、勉強に成りました）。それと、「無頼派」の一 人でした。 8)


is that traditional enuff?

:lol: I wish I could read Japanese :lol:

[airwoodstock]

最近「ウェブは人間の考え方に似ている」と思います。いろんなアイデアから"リンク"がありますね。今日またインター ネットを使いすぎ、ゴールデンバット(昨日のポスト）と無頼派（９月のポスト）の"リンク"を見つけまし た。太宰 治 (だざい おさむ）はゴールデンバットが好きそうでした（ここに見て、勉強に成りました）。それと、「無頼派」の一 人でした。 8)


is that traditional enuff?

Hey Parrots, you forgot to add オフロードコーヒー/バニラ今すぐ! to the end!!!

:lol: :lol: :lol: :shock:

Just Kidding!!

[Premium Parrots]

opps..........sorry. my bad........ Farm and Fleet bound

[airwoodstock]

opps..........sorry. my bad........ Farm and Fleet bound

LOL.....

Farm and Barn!!!! My second home! I've got one about 2 miles from me! I get all my Carhartt stuff there.

[Juxtaposer]

Bake a pris of snus
and then shove it up your lip
nothing bothers now

[danielan]

It's time for more thread archeology!

Bump.

Haiku Thread:

It is time to bump
Reviving another snus thread
Please post your snus poem.

[MojoQuestor]

You will not catch me
Posting in a haiku thread.
It gives me a rash.

--Itchynow Kamazuma